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Red paint
on a beige wall,
              heat--
              spices the air.
I run my fingers
through
the course grains
of crumbling stone,
watching
flowers bloom,
           in  your presence.
I miss you.
©Amber Lucas
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:iconcamelopardalisinblue:
camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Feb 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Lovely lovely lovely. :)
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:iconwhitelightwings:
whitelightwings Featured By Owner Feb 13, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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:iconcamelopardalisinblue:
camelopardalisinblue Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
You're very welcome. :)
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Alontwig Featured By Owner Jan 29, 2013  Student Photographer
Wow, really well done! The ending is really well put together.
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:iconwhitelightwings:
whitelightwings Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thanks so much!
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Alontwig Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Student Photographer
Your quite welcome!
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gangstalike Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2013  Student Traditional Artist
"watching flowers bloom in your presence", I think, is the most powerful line. This could be interpretted so many different ways, really lovely poem
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whitelightwings Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Thank you!
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kushamisaru Featured By Owner Jan 26, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is a very sweet piece, but I'm not sure what it's about....

I'm guessing it's a dead person considering the description
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whitelightwings Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Not quite, but similar, more about lost love.
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